Hello Legendary Mask



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I feel your words captured the picture well. I would love to read a second stanza. Nice rhythm and flow. It looks good on the page. The title works with this poem as well.

A couple of suggestions, first change pray to prayer, it sounds better and makes more sense. The second add a couple of periods after fly and sky. It will help the flow of the poem.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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