Hallo!

I like the basic concept of the poem -- what freedom actually means to you. My favourite parts -- the first two lines, and the last verse.

Here are a few suggestions / points, feel free to use them or disregard them!
1. The title and brief description -- I think you could make these a bit more catchy. What you currently have is generic and doesn't echo the original thought in the poem.
2. I didn't understand the last three lines of the first verse. Aren't you actually saying that you have to make sure you are yourself, and make a conscious effort to be so? If that's the case, how is it 'involuntary'?
3. In the second verse, I wonder if you'd like to change the word 'letting'. You let them take time/space, so 'letting' seems to me to be from their point of view, not yours.
4. Maybe you'd like to use some more WritingML, like font or colour, to enhance the impact of your words.

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