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A very poignant poem, in a few short lines. It immediately conveys the feeling of being trapped.

I like the formatting -- the lack of capital letters and the font. Initially, I was wondering whether to suggest that you add a brief description -- then I thought it's actually a nice touch to leave it this way and let the reader discover the poem for themselves.

I will, however, suggest that you take a look at the genres. The two you've chosen don't seem as good a fit as some of the others available on site. I was a bit surprised at 'romance' because the poem seems to deal with being trapped within oneself, and not in a relationship. At my first reading, I took it to mean that 'he' is a real bird -- and then I saw the genre and wondered whom you are referring to when you say 'he'.

I guess that's the idea of the poem, to leave things open to interpretation!

Write On
Sonali

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