Wow.
It's a little difficult to know how to review this. It's a very personal and emotional piece. I don't know if it is something you went through yourself, if so, I hope writing this helped you cope.

With the title, brief description and first few lines, I was expecting it to be something about a break-up, and what actually happened in the poem came as a slight shock.

The verse structure and words chosen echo the sentiment of the piece. I'd suggest centralising it and changing the font, to give it a softer look. The contrast between sunrise and sunset is a nice touch.

I appreciate the note you have given at the end of the poem, about the form of poetry. I don't know much about poetic forms, so reading a poem I enjoy and finding out more is fun. I followed the link and see you have quite a page, there!

Write On!
Sonali

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