Greetings from "The WDC Angel Army" !

This is a very thought provoking poem. Yes, most people just see the 'glamour' and not the 'sacrifice'. You've brought out the question very powerfully. The last verse had me really pausing to think.

Here are a few points:
1. You've left the item type as 'other'. This doesn't show up on lists and your work gets less exposure on site. You may want to pick 'poetry'.

2. I actually started wondering who the 'you' is you're addressing. For a while, it seemed to be any reader. But then, 'you' seemed to change to some specific person or group of people. I know this is open to interpretation, but I just wanted to let you know that it doesn't seem to be one 'you' through the poem.

3. Sometimes, where you've got two lines running on, you need to put the space between them in. Maybe you'd like to look at the formatting of the poem, change the font, or put it in italics or centralise it.

Thanks for sharing this poignant poem and important message!

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