Hello very thankful



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

An intriguing poem full of imagery. I can see the story unfold as I read. The title fits the poem, it offers mood and tone of the poem. The rhythm is good, it moves the story along at a good pace.

There are a couple of lines that to me are redundant and slows the poem down and disrupting the flow of the poem.

This piece does have emotions, I feel sad for the woman being stoned. It also leaves me wondering why such a punishment for just loving a person, or is there more to the story that has not been told?


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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