Hello Wolfbane

Long time, no chat. I hope the holidays are finding you well.

Title

Love the title, it pulled me in to read your poem. It also offers mood and tone. It gives a perspective of what the poem is about.



The rhyming scheme help the rhythm move at a good pace. Except the last four lines where you change it up a bit. Each lines flows nicely into the next the line. Good word selection.


"Pleasure of Embrace" reminds me of vampires so this is how I see your poem. Vampires enjoying themselves with blood staining the satin white sheets, screams of desires. I can really connect with this poem, but I have those dark desires. This is not a dark poem.


My only suggestion I can offer would be to make this into a couple of stanzas. Other than that it is well written.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest



Gypsy Ann

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