Greetings from "The WDC Angel Army" !

This is a very poignant poem. I could picture it happening and feel the emotions. I like the varying length of the lines, the repetition of the word 'cried' where needed, and the repetition of some entire verses.

A special mention of the cover photo, it is lovely. It complements the poem without imitating it. The folder name 'Blue Windows' sounds intriguing, too.

A few suggestions (feel free to use them or disregard them, as you think fit.)

1. I'd suggest you pick an item type and genres, so that your work shows up on lists and gets more exposure on WDC.

2. I know it doesn't matter as much in a poem, but I thought I'd point out that in the first verse, 'time' and 'were' being linked tripped up my reading a bit. (Time - was, times - were.)

3. It might give this poem a softer feel to centralise it and change the font. (Times, italics, centralise is what I'm thinking.)

If this is biographical, I hope writing this very relatable poem helped you cope with the emotions. It seems to have been written a while ago, I hope it helped you heal.

Write On!
- Sonali

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