Greetings from "The WDC Angel Army" !

This is a lovely poem! I could just see the images in my mind's eye. It's beautiful the way you contrast winter with other seasons.

Some suggestions:
(Please feel free to use them or disregard them - as you see fit!)

Genre -- you've picked 'nature', but left the other slots as 'other'. Maybe you'd like to pick 'art' as one of them.

Would you like to start the second like with the word 'to' instead of 'in' ... ?

Also -- you have sight and sound (wolves). I was sort of waiting for the other senses to be brought out, while still maintaining sight as the main one ... (is that too much to ask, of nineteen lines? )

Thank you for the explanation of the form -- I don't know much about poetry forms, and reading a poem I've enjoyed followed by an explanation always helps.

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem!
Write On!


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