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This poem talks of an ex who returned for selfish reasons. The voice and emotion of the speaker come out clearly. I read it twice, to understand that you were moving from him missing the writing, to the love. This was cleverly done -- something as small as line-spacing to something as large as the love itself.

I'm not sure if this is something you've gone through personally. If it is, I hope that writing this helped you clarify some thoughts and move forward on the way to healing.

In just one place, my reading tripped a bit -- the third verse, second line -- 'wanted'. You were talking about 'the selfish side', which would mean you wrote 'want' there. Else, you could add the word 'you'.

And I'm curious, who is it pictured in the cover photo?

Thanks for sharing this
Write on!



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