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Review #4453725
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 "Christmas Time"  [E]
Just a little diddy I put together for fun
by Angel Lee/J.L. Russell
Review of "Christmas Time"  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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         *Stockingr* Greetings, Angel Lee/J.L. Russell ! I found your item, ""Christmas Time"" , in your portfolio and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         *Bulbb* I like this and especially how you put this together by taking the word at the end of each line and using it to begin the next, and eventually you come full-circle with the last line mirroring the first. How fun! *Smile*

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Bulbv* Your lack of punctuation worked perfectly in this piece. *Wink*

Other Suggestions
         *Bulbr* Nothing distracted me whatsoever. Something you might consider, however, is centering this piece. That's my only suggestion. *Smile*

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Bulbo* This little diddy, as you refer to it, makes me want to try this! It would also be a great exercise for children, wouldn't it? *Smile*

         *Starb* My favorite line...
                             Celebration of time

         As the years creep forward, the more I realize how important it is to celebrate each moment.
Of course I need to remind myself of this more often than I should. *Wink*

*Holly1* Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful. *Holly2*

*Candycanep* Have a great day and *Candycanep*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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