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 | New Beginings  [E] Praising The Lord Every Morning  |
| (4.5)  Greetings, Angel Lee/J.L. Russell ! I found your item, "New Beginings" , in your portfolio and decided to review it.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.My First Impression  What a bright, happy, feel-good piece! I love how you called your morning New Beginnings. What a great way to greet each morning!Punctuation/Grammar/Typos  You were consistent with the lack of punctuation throughout this piece and it worked perfectly. I did, however, discover a typo in Line 11: With the bird's singing high bird's doesn't need to be possessive in this case, only plural--> With the birds singing high Other Suggestions  In Line 3: Out of my window You might consider Outside my window.Thoughts/Emotions  A lovely piece indeed. What better way to wake up than with birds singing, sunny skies, and a perfect temperature outdoors. Makes me look forward to going south in February! Hmmm... maybe January.   My favorite lines...Today is a new day Let's start it out right. What a great way to begin each day!  Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful.   Have a great day and K e e p on W r i t i n g ! ~Cubby ")    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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