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 | "I Should Have Known"  [E] Through all the twists and turns in life, there is one constent...  |
| (4.5)  Greetings, Angel Lee/J.L. Russell ! I found your item, ""I Should Have Known"" , in your portfolio and decided to review it.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.My First Impression  I could almost hear a song here, but your genre choices did not include Lyrics so now I'd like you to consider adding a melody to this lovely piece! You certainly have the gift of poetry. Punctuation/Grammar/Typos  As with most of you poetry, you are consistent with not using punctuation, and again, it works just fine. In Line 11: lifes troubling mazes  life's troubling mazes (to show possession)Other Suggestions  No other suggestions.Thoughts/Emotions  I now realize that you haven't been here since 12/26/2014 and I'm saddened by this. I feel like I know you after reviewing most of your items in your portfolio. If you ever come back, please send me a note! I love your poetry and would love for you to write more!   My favorite and brought me through turned my grey clouds into blue  Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful.   Have a great day and K e e p on W r i t i n g ! ~Cubby ")    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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