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 | When I'm With You  [E] maybe a greeting card...what do you think?  |
| (5.0)  Greetings, Angel Lee/J.L. Russell ! I found your item, "When I'm With You" , in your portfolio and decided to review it.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.My First Impression  I just had to review one more item in your portfolio, especially once my eyes caught the word greeting card in your title summary.  Oatmeal bought a greeting card jingle from me a couple years ago and paid me $70 for maybe five words.  Anyway, this would make a great greeting card! Have you tried publishing any?Punctuation/Grammar/Typos  Again, no punctuation use, and it works. However, if you decide to send it to a greeting card company, you should consider adding punctuation. Nothing distracted me whatsoever.Other Suggestions  I have nothing to add.Thoughts/Emotions  Your ears have got to be ringing, lol. I hope you check in soon so we can share our thoughts on poetry and children and grandchildren and greeting cards and...  anything else we have in common. Please come back! My favorite lines...When I'm with you My heart skips a beat  Nicely written!   Have a great day and K e e p on W r i t i n g ! ~Cubby ")    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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