Namaste!

I clicked the 'random review' button and was pleasantly surprised when one of your poems showed up!

Well, I've learnt so much about writing poetry from you that I can hardly presume to review your poem -- but WDC has placed it on my platter, so here I go.

The sentiment comes through fully. This poem, as is, is complete in all ways and the form fits the emotion.

There's only one thing I did feel as a reader -- I'd have liked to know where the poet is now, in life, in terms of a relationship. Is there a new relationship, but the old one still haunts? Is the poet alone these days, due to the lost relationship?

As I said, the poem is complete as is, and of course the writer chooses to reveal as much as s/he wants to. I'm just mentioning my reaction as a reader. It probably means your poem has done its job, since I got invested in the character portrayed!

Also -- a small point about the genre. You've chosen 'melodrama', which implied to me that the emotions here are over-stated, not really felt. I don't feel this is the case, is that so?

Again -- feel odd reviewing a poem by one who has taught me so much!

Thank you!
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