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Autumn.  [E]
A very small poem about Autumn.
by Spiritual Dawning
Review of Autumn.  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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         *Stockingr* Greetings, Spiritual Dawning ! I found your item, "Autumn." , in Auto Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title & Summary
         *Bulbr* Good title, but it was the image you provided that first attracted me to this piece. So beautiful!

My First Impression
         *Bulbb* Simply lovely! And multi-genred! (if that's a word, lol) It could be Romance, Nature, Children, Environment, Experience, etc. I don't see that very often. *Wink*

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Bulbg* Your flow is soothing and your words paint a picture I can visually clearly. I noticed nothing distracting whatsoever. *Smile*

Other Suggestions
         *Bulbo* Keep on writing such lovely poetry. *Bigsmile*

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Bulbv* I love alliteration, so Across the frozen land lay leaves hooked me! Such a feel-good poem. Thanks for sharing!

         *Starb* My favorite line...
                             lay leaves in water

*Holly1* Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful. *Holly2*

*Candycanep* Have a great day and *Candycanep*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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