Hello JESykes

I love your poem. The title works well for this piece. The rhythm move the poem at a good pace. Each line flows nicely into the next line. Good rhyming scheme and word selection.

I can see your story unfold as I read your poem. It offers good imagery. The poem is interesting. It has a message. It also has depth and beauty. I can't pick one line as a favorite because I love waterfalls, owls, the night and the forest.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Gypsy Ann

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