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 |  | Just Like Any Other Boy  [E] For my husband Andy, from our autistic son Jonah. I dictated. Happy Father's Day!  |
| (5.0)  This review is being given as part of the Simply Positive Reviews & Rising Stars groups. Please note that all opinions rendered below are in the spirit of giving, in an effort to help, you, the writer, improve the piece. You are under no obligation to use any of my suggestions and I won't think less of you if you don't use them. Regardless, thank you for the opportunity to review your work. General Impressions This is a stunning tribute! What a great gift for father's day! I love the heartbeat drumming - it provides a beautiful cadence throughout the poem. It made me long for my own father. Favorite Part heartbeat drumming fa-ther, fa-ther, fa-ther I would imagine there's a mo-ther heartbeat too :) Rating Explanation 5.0 for beautiful execution, creativity, and emotional impact. Just wow! I wouldn't change a thing! Thanks so much for sharing! If you're interested in reviewing any of my work in return (not required but certainly appreciated), I am currently seeking reviews of the following pieces:
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