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Season of Joy  [E]
spring dispels winter gloom.
by jaya
Review of Season of Joy  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Jaya!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Season of Joy"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This is a beautiful inspirational poem Jaya. I like the enchanted beauty you have painted here. “mild sun “ “Cloudless sky “ “ lily, rose and creamy magnolia “ all things blended together made a beautiful canvas. It captures the surrounding beauty of nature. I like the title “Season of Joy“.

I like the small rhyming.

You have beautiful thoughts inside every line. My favorite lines
“On the slopes and shades of the mountain range
Far away in the dense forest, on tall trees and bush alike”

Each season brings different looks and beauty which reflected in this poem. I enjoy the scents, colors and sound of this poem.

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