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| (5.0)   This review is being given as part of the Simply Positive Reviews & Rising Stars groups. Please note that all opinions rendered below are in the spirit of giving, in an effort to help, you, the writer, improve the piece. You are under no obligation to use any of my suggestions and I won't think less of you if you don't use them. Regardless, thank you for the opportunity to review your work. General Impressions This is meant to be an inspirational and uplifting message of positivity and it achieves that well and concisely. The language is crisp and concrete. Favorite Part "The course to success is difficult to find" Suggestions for improvement I didn't care for the adverb in this - usually. I might be better to say, "may never show up". Rating Explanation I gave this a 5.0 for it's uplifting, inspirational tone and topic that will push readers to find their inner resiliency and courage to push forward. Well done! If you're interested in reviewing any of my work in return (not required but certainly appreciated), I am currently seeking reviews of the following pieces:
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