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 A planet's 11th birthday party  [E]
It's been 1.1 million years. So there's the 11th birthday party for the planet.
by Angelica- Happy May 5th!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I clicked on the Read and Review option and it brought me to your fine, imaginative poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about what the future might hold. This seems to predict things from the past that people still believe might happen, but we do not know when.

I notice that the first line of the next to last stanza, you have "breath" when you mean to write "breathe", I believe.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

We never know what will happen in the future if we don't take care of things. This is an ominous warning for a celebration that adapts to things that are not enjoyable to us now.

Very creative and clever! Looking back, I wonder what you think about this now - probably it is that you would reiterate your point.

Nice work!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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