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Review #4457188
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 Knock First  [ASR]
One lover speaking to another
by Schnujo is Late to Lannister
Review of Knock First  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and it took me to your fine poem!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I like what you have done with the prompt. It is as if the feelings were meant to be and could not be avoided by the passive participant who now wants to be in charge, with certain requirements stated. That is how a lot of relationships get started - with the "falling in love" metaphor playing a large part.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* This is my favorite part:

"Leave me never
For now my heart’s door has
Closed once again
With you inside."

So, the choice is with the beloved, but there are consequences that are implied with choices. I like how you have chosen a word order that isn't what I might have expected with the "leave me never" working very well indeed.

Very fine work!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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