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 | The Whistler  [E] My first ghost story. A little rough around the edges...  |
| (4.5)| Hi! It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Whistler" on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you. FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good spooky story. I like the setting of the story how you described the surroundings. You told beautifully from first person point view. THE STORY: This is a tale of a man Jordan who worked in a Gulf station. Which was situated a few hundred feet below the crest of Washburn's Hill. Jordan truly believed his grandma’s quotes for example “Nobody that travels in the wee hours is up to honest doings” , "Don't spin widdershins on a full moon. It'll bring bad luck to you!". CHARACTERS: I like the character Jordan. You crafted him so beautifully. SUGGESTION: I feel the ending of this story is a mystery. I think it would be wonderful if you write what happen next. FINAL THOUGHT: I enjoyed. Keep writing!!   Mina   ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 12/31/2018 @ 3:19pm EST