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All I Want For Christmas  [E]
My letter to Santa.
by w0lfbane
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wolfbane!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "All I Want For Christmas"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This is a good poem for Christmas. You told beautifully through this poem. The poem packed with message. I like this seasonal poem.

Your rhyming is absolutely beautiful. The tone I find this poem is soothing. The poem flows beautifully with your crafted words. My favorite lines
“Teach them to rid themselves of guilt and blame,
that to be loved there cannot be shame.”

I enjoyed it reading.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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