Hello Zeke

I love writing about nature. And I love your poem. It made me wonder what beauty you were talking about and why destroy it. The ending sadden me for nature should not be destroyed. I understand the concept of cutting the grass and weeds, which is why I say a small prayer for the return of the grass and offer an apology before I mow.

Your poem has beauty and power. There is a good rhythm to your poem. It flows nicely with a good word selection. My favorite lines are




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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Gypsy Ann

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