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Hello alf8collier

An interesting poem full of imagery. The title is good and fits the poem. The rhythm and flow is a little choppy, there are a couple of lines a little longer in length. And adding more punctuation and capitalizing the beginning of the sentences will help the flow. Good word selection.

My favorite lines are
burying the last of summer’s secrets
in the diaries
of the forgotten



Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.



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