Hello!

I just read your poem.

Your poem has a good message with an unique concept. You have written a very good piece of poem, I really liked the way you put out your feelings. I appreciate the simplicity. You have good rhyming. The words are so true. I like the lines

“Like work horses we wear blinders,
Our time's an abbreviation,
We ignore the harsh reminders,
In the abyss of creation.”

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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