This is a good poem. Yes, I believe that life is more than words. I really liked how you penned down all your thoughts so beautifully in this poem about our life. I appreciate the simplicity and meaning it has. You have good rhyming. The words are so true. I like the lines “May my life be true and clear,
a thing of beauty,
a poem to live by.”
Happy Writing!
Mina
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