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 Tired   [E]
Tired is a poem about nothing but pain
by Dominesha Jackson
Review of Tired  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello!

I just read your poem "Tired " 

The Poem:  *FlowerY* I like this poem. I like the emotions evokes in this poem. Especially the last four lines is so inspirational.
The little things I fear
But just know one day
I will succeed
While they run in fear

It tells that nothing will work if you don't help yourself. So, trust your inner voice.

Keep writing!!

Mina  


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