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Hello!

I read your poem "Invalid Item
This has beautiful thoughts inside every line,

Emotions, I hide,
Opinions, kept secret.
Trust is hard to get,
Friendships break too soon.

I like the final two lines. It has good message and indeed inspirational.

The words are so true. I like the little rhyming.

Best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

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