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Review #4461039
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Losing the Light  [13+]
Forced Endings and Beginnings
by ♥Hooves♥
Review of Losing the Light  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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         *Penguin* Greetings, ♥Hooves♥ ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" , *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title & Summary
         Both your title and summary hold more than one meaning... I love that! To me anyway, the name of the title and the summary are very important. I don't want to know the ending before I read a piece. But I do appreticate a title, such as this, that has a double meaning.

My First Impression
         I read this several times and each time, I picked up yet another special meaning tucked within your beautiful words! (I must add a thank you for the larger text, too. *Wink*)

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Asteriskb* Absolutely no corrections needed here.

Other Suggestions
         *Asteriskv* Send this in (or 0ut) for publication! I love, love, love this!

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Asterisko* I'm not sure why, but when I read this piece, I automatically thought back to my grandmother's house st Christmas with all the older-fashioned decorations and brighter lights and the smell of pine. Her trees were always so tall, as was the ceiling in the music room where the tree stood. Perhaps it was because I was so young that my eyes were so big and in awe of this tree. But those days are gone now, and like your poem's summary, forced endings and beginnings. There are so many things about this piece that I love... so much that touches my soul and tugs at my heart strings. This is not just about the days growing longer and Christmas memories being packed up in a box till next year. Thank you for sharing! *Heart*

         *Starb* My favorite
...we can't hide from the past
packed away temporarily...

*Penguin* Nicely written! I have no suggestions. *Penguin*

*Fisho* Have a great day and *Fishb*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
~Cubby ")
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