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 In the Stillness of a Summer's Eve  [E]
A boy, a dog, and a warm summer night on the farm after chores.
by Baloney Bill
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "In the Stillness of a Summer's Eve"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

You paint a beautiful picture of farms people on a warm summer night after their chores. I like the enchanted beauty you have painted here. “cool breeze through the arbor leaves “ “crickets sing “ “stars glow “ “A boy, a dog “ “back porch light “ all things blended together made a beautiful canvas of summer night. I like the title and the peaceful rhythms it has. My favorite line
“But on the porch, it’s far away,
Far as the chores of another day,”

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