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First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

I like this thoughtful poem. The main image is wonderful.
It describes beautifully a lot of problems that our mother earth faces now.

We are continuously polluting her air by creating greenhouse gases, polluting water of rivers, canals, lakes, by chemicals wastes and polythene. We don’t even think what will happen to our next generations which reflected in this poem. It is high time for all of us to think of our dear planet.

I like the last stanza. It's filled with hopes.

Keep Writing!!

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