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 Emoticon challenge Day#2  [E]
day 2 emoticon challenge angel army...
by ~WhoMe???~
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi WhoMe!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Emoticon challenge Day#2"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I like this story written in using emoticons*ThumbsUpL*

Beautifully written, clever*Idea*, great use of emoticons*Smile*. I love the way the story ended*Stop*. You've perfectly matched it. I appreciate the emoticons you used here in this story*Books1*. It really speak the words*Silent*. The way you told this keeps me reading it to the end.

I especially like the part “Jake was a very big part of this event. We didn't want any sibling rivalry and had tried to include him in as much as possible. He had packed the diaper bag with a*Bottle*, a*Teddy* , , , , and a . I think the last one was for him.”

I want to thank Angel Army "The WDC Angel Army" for giving such a challenging prompt for writing.

I enjoyed*RainbowL*. It's fun reading *Flowerw*

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