Eye of the Storm [E] Capturing a pause in time on life's midway.. (Form: Free Verse) A Shadows and Light Entry |
A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? You sent me a nice review recently so here I am. What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? This is about trying to focus on a point in time as life is happening. We try and capture what would be the title, the eye of the storm and savor that moment. It is not always so easy to realize what is happening as it is going on. It all goes by so fast as it speeds up and I get slower. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? This was my favorite part: "Garish light fades to crystal pinpoints – jewels that shine with the brilliance of the tears behind the Carney's eyes. " There are those moments, aren't there? I think of my wedding and a few others. The moment I realized that my husband would survive his medical ordeal. There are bits and pieces of brilliance in all our lives is we have the energy or the awareness (I guess) to stop and just focus on the good. Usually, I lose track and only know things way after the fact. That is the challenge, to know what is happening when it's going on. Of course, it is not straightforward. Life isn't that way. Brilliant poem about a wild and adventurous ride (if we are lucky). Well done! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you! Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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