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by ruwth
         Review for entry/chapter: "~ Wanted: A Spanish-speaking friend! ~" 
Review by Cubby
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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         *Penguin* Greetings, ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" , and your item happens to be next in line. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title & Summary
         There is no summary, as this is an entry. *Bigsmile* Your entry title, however, is perfect!

My First Impression
         *Shock2* My first impression was, What??? *Laugh* Of course I understand the briefness of this piece now, because of the contest. I'm certainly glad you added that information. I don't write anything here anymore without contest information included, like which contest it is, word/line count, and prompt. If it's not written for a story, well... then I don't include anything else, I suppose. Seems like most of my writing is written for contests though.

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Asteriskb* Perfect punctuation, no grammar issues, and absolutely no typoes. *ThumbsUpL*

Other Suggestions
         *Asteriskv* There is nothing for me to suggest.

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Asterisko* I wish I would've taken Spanish in high school. Instead, I chose French. I dropped out after the first year. The only other choice was Spanish. I could kick myself for not choosing it. We traveled to Texas last winter for about six weeks and heard lots of Spanish, especially when we went to Mexico, of course. It's such a beautiful language. We are headed that way again in less than a week. Again, I wish I would've learned Spanish!

         *Starb* My favorite line...
                             It may be the only way for me to master the language.
         And what a great way to improve what you already know plus learn more naturally!

*Penguin* Best of luck with your endevor, Ruwth! *Penguin*

*Fisho* Have a great day and *Fishb*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
~Cubby ")
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