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 Cold in Ohio  [13+]
You can always indulge on the suffering of someone other then yourself.
by That was all she wrote;
Review of Cold in Ohio  
Review by J.L. O'Dell
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First off, welcome to WdC. I agree that regardless of what happens, never give up. I'm sure this is a great example of a free form poem. The spacing between is nice so it reads easily. No spelling or grammatical mistakes that I noticed. Your word choices were fine. It tugged at my emotions as I am sure most of us have been in that situation of feeling alone. Nice done. Write on!!

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