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Hi, a great take on the old fairytale.
Just a few things though. How had Rapunzle got back into the tower after she got back from the hairdressers? Why would she have gone back?
Nit picking I know, seeing as it’s a fairytale and all make believe.
I like the fact her lover was on his old motorcycle.
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers Sue


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