Being that time of year, when I came across this piece, I needed to read it. Nicely done and it flows well. I like the thoughts expressed and the emotion of the piece. I did not notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes. I read through because you hooked me in the first stanza. (A little long) Your piece was clear and well spaced. I like the center alignment. I can't believe no one has reviewed this before. Write on!!

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