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Will You Move Heaven  [13+]
My first attempt at a Rondelet.
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Review by J.L. O'Dell
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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It looks like you did a great job on this for your first attempt. You nailed the seven line requirement. And you nailed the 1st, 3rd, and final line requirement. So nicely done. I didn't see any glaring spelling or grammatical errors. It was creative and nicely formatted to make it easy to read. Great job. Write on!!

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