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 An Unfinished Rehersal  [E]
The members of an orchestra get the chills
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am participating in the I Write in 2019 activity and you posted before me in the forum. It is my pleasure and honor to read your short story.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I enjoyed reading your take on the prompt.

I noticed one thing to mention - in the last sentence of the first paragraph you repeat the word "all" and the phrase "all in the" a couple of times. That is just a small thing that is easily fixed.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I like how you have them go away to reconvene another day. In light of the happenings in the story, that seems like a good and logical solution. I wondered who was the source for the laugh, a mystery for another day no doubt.

Nice work with the Writer's Cramp prompt! Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! Proving that a review can be honest and positive at the same time. *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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