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 Feathers  [E]
A poem NOT in my own POV (I'm only 13 lol)
by Ashes
Review of Feathers  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is a lovely image for me from Lizco252!



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I clicked on the "Read and Review" option and it brought me to your fine poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that this is written with a lot of creativity and imagination whether one considers your confess age or not. It is very impressive for such a young person to have such vision and such a clear poetic voice.

Many older writers do not have this much insight into life, either.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite passage as it led me to believe that the birds are guiding you (the speaker, "you") in your journey:

"There was a great hawk,
Soaring above me, taking hold
Of my eyes, making sure
They didn't stray."

We all would be better off if we stopped, looked and learned from the ones around us who fly naturally.

I enjoyed reading your poem very much!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! I only read things I like and send reviews then sometimes. I am not much into critiquing because I am not an expert on much of anything. I enjoy reading and I do it because I do enjoy it and if I pick something I don't like, I don't send a review. *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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