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 I am Sham  [E]
Am I a failure? Who can tell me?
by Kalai
Review of I am Sham  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I clicked on the Read and Review option and it brought me to your introspective poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* The title makes me think that the conclusion that one comes to is negative.

But we all have these questions, at times, about decisions we make. I have run into people who insist that they are always "right" and "blameless" about everything. That is self delusion there, we all are flawed, it's part of the human condition.

So, looking back on the life led can be hard, but we need to focus on the whole picture and not just the problems and obstacles.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I especially like those first two lines, combined with the last two lines of the poem and what you say about "time." We all have the tendency to be our worst critics and that brings that home.

I think that time plays tricks on all of us and time is the true sham, not the person.

Very interesting poem!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! I only review items I enjoy reading pretty much these days. That's because of the limited time and attention span. You have a very interesting perspective on the passage of time and self evaluation. Well done! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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