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Hi Noni Bird!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: An interesting plot and setup for a romance novel!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error to report and one addition or deletion to ponder:

1. In this section - Call Me A Rose by Elisheva Silver, and Force of Love by Michael Naftali - you may want to eliminate the comma and please explain who is Michael Naftali and why do we care about his book?

Readability: A well written and interesting read!

Suggestions: I have no further suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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