Hi Sorji!

Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them!

Overall Impression: I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like. I enjoyed your little nature poem, it was very thought provoking.

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!

Readability: A well written and enjoyable read.

Suggestions: I am not sure why but the "wonder" of the 7th line kept throwing me off, I kept wanting to say "wander".

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina

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