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Precious Memories Of My Cat Tigger  [E]
My kitty of 17 years. Written for Beloved Pets Contest.
by Princess Megan Rose 22 Years
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi Princess Megan Snow Rose!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: A very sweet and touching little story!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this section - gray mouse you bought into my bed - you may want to change "bought" to "brought".

Readability: A well written and lovely bit of prose!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to ponder.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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