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Review #4469749
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 The Key To the Solution  [ASR]
We need to understand each other
by THANKFUL SONALI Now What?
Review by Lovina
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Thankful Sonali!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: A surprising little read!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - and Dad and I was stuffed as we waddled back home - you may want to change "was" to "were".

2. In this section - into the air, and carried to our front door - you may want to eliminate the comma.

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: You may want to decide if it is a key or keys, you switch back and forth throughout the story.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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