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First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

The poem tells a story of two lovers who quarrel because of their volatile nature and decide to be best friend forever. I like the simplicity of this poem and the way you displayed life. I like the rhyming. The tone is filled with melancholy but filled with hope. You displayed beautifully the forms and stages of our emotions.
I like the lines
“I will never stop remembering you
And all the things we use to do
I will think about you until the end
You were my Best Friend”
I like the rhyming. The tone is filled with melancholy but soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.
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