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THE DREAM OF LOVE  [E]
Exploring the nature of love
by LauraMustetiu
Review of THE DREAM OF LOVE  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "THE DREAM OF LOVE"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This is a beautiful poem about exploring the nature of love..You poured beautifully sweet and tender emotions. The title fits your poem. I like the imaginary and the vivid words. You expressed beautifully feelings through words. For example “You are the mystery, you are the chameleon,
With so many faces, across the day and night.”
And “You, the mirage of a soul's desert,
Ah you, the humans' deepest mystery,”

I like the rhyming. The tone is filled with melancholy but soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.
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