Hello again. I have absolutely nothing to suggest for this poem!!!

I love it. You have such a way of pulling great mental images from my head! You epitomize 'cozy' with the 'little' house.
'Charging' is a great word for getting the meaning of the outside world. 'Asylum and hectic' fit beautifully. You did great to leave out the 'rat' from the race.

Your third verse is wonderful in again showing the real self home can bring out. Who wants 'sterner stuff' in your cozy world. Nicely done.

You really do show the difference in the 'outer' world and the 'inner' sanctum. I really like your work.
Thanks for sharing this as well.
love, LinnAnn